2016년 9월 24일 오후 10:29

들녁길 16.09.02. 04:08


I really hate to say like this, but I gotta point out some mistakes in your writing.
First of all, all in all..I can't, for the life of me, get the picture of what you're trying to say.
On top of it, you are using too much broken English.
There is no such word as "nutriate" in English.
what is more..a your friend should be corrected, "a friend of yours"
"Be an only doctor must be modified "the only doctor"
Talking of lover, it means a partner in a sexual relationship with sb whom he or she
is not married to." therefore, you should be discreet in expressing yourself in English.


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들녁길 16.09.02. 04:19


In a nutshell, there leaves a lot to be desired in your english.
Hope my tips on your writing will be of great help to you.
Has Ta La Vista..!

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┗ 마인드 정담 16.09.02. 06:12


Many thanks for your comments and corrections. You should be here in E-room at an earlier stage.

I also used to be very punctual in grammar but have made some mistakes yesterday. It was early evening when the work done but i was already a little bit drunken. I had to be careful before my words opened to the public. Please accept my deep appologies.

Be that as it may, i would like to invite you to this class as an english teacher and a mate at the same time. In fact we have some members in and from the states who speaks a
real good live english. Please come and everybody here will surely

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┗ 하늘을나는 16.09.02. 20:20


Whoa whoa....
Take it easy 들녁님..
First of all, thank you for visiting our Engish club.
We are all learning English here in this club for FUN.
Everyone here tries hard to put these foreign
words together to make sense.
Nobody is perfect, even native speakers.
Thanks for your corrections but let's not be so harsh
by saying some negative words.
It breaks my heart to listen.
Thanks for your special interest in this club.

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┗ 리얼리 16.09.02. 09:15


하늘을나는 You're right~!
I totally agree with you~

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┗ 썬샤인1 16.09.02. 12:55


리얼리 I am a hundred percent agreed with 하늘.
I am amazed at what people can do in this room.
Don't get discouraged by criticism, 마인 정담님.
No matter what, don't ever stop doing your thing, I really enjoy reading your farming life.


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┗ 리얼리 16.09.02. 14:21


썬샤인1 I really enjoy reading his
farming life, too.

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┗ 마인드 정담 16.09.03. 18:02


썬샤인1 Thanks my companies~!

I love to listen to guiter duo of Sor's 'L'encourgement' best played by John Williams and Jullian Bream.

Your L'encourgement' herein is better than their's. Thank you~♧