Sol

<2005년 2월 18일 (금요일) 오후 11:23>
--- seong ja kim <seongjak@yahoo.co.kr> wrote:

> Dear brother
> Dear Brother: or Dear Brother,

> When I writing a sentence, grammar is my weak point.
When I write, or When I am writing,
Whenever I write a sentence, I have to deal with my
poor grammar.
Every time I write, I have to be so conscious about
grammar. It bothers me a lot.
When it comes to writing, grammar is my weakest
point. or Speaking of writing, I have so much trouble
with grammar.
Even when I have to write a few sentences, I have to
be very mindful of my grammar. (I have to be very
cautious not to make any mistakes.)
Whenever I write, I am struggling with grammar.
Whenever I write, I am so frustrated with grammar,
tense, number, agreement, and so on. The English
language is so stupid.

> Yesterday ,after sent the e- mail to you I was
> unwilling to that.
"After" can be used as a preposition or as a
conjuctive. If you want to used it as a preposition,
you want to put an object after "after". Ex: After
sending the email, --- If you want to use it as a
conjunctive, you put a clause after "after." Ex:
After I sent you the email, --- or After I had sent
the email, ---
Yesterday, after sending the email to you, I --
Yesterday, after I sent the e-mail to you, I was
unwilling to send (a verb) that.(?) The meaning is
not very clear. Maybe you mean (that) you did not go
over your letter, but you sent it anyway. You
mean(that) you sent the email by mistake by typing
SEND button. You mean (that) you didn't feel it was
ready, but you sent it unintentionally ? You were not
sure that the letter was free from mistakes\? So you
were hesitating? But you sent it willy-nilly. You had
sent the email, but you didn't feel good about it
afterwards? In other words, the aftertaste was not so
good? That's what you mean maybe ?

> I always be anxious about my sentence.
I am always anxious about my sentences.
This may not be very clear to the reader.
I am always anxious about (my) writing.
Remember the conjugation of "be" verb ? I am, you
are, (s)he is, we are, you are, they are, I was, you
were, etc. Don't say "I be happy.", say I am happy.

> I don't mind about your advice.
I don't mind your advice. "Mind" is a transitive
verb. It needs an object right behind it. You don't
need any preposition behind it. Consult the
dictionary.
I welcome your advice.
I'd be happy to have your advice.
I am open to your advice.
Your advice is always welcome.
Your advice will be very much appreciated.
I'd appreciate your advice.
Please don't hesitate to give me any advice.

> I want to it.
I want it.
I want to have it.
I'd be pleased to have your advice anytime.
I'd like to have your advice.
You could give me a little coaching in grammar.
I'll be very glad to have your advice.
I need your help in this matter. (in writing)
>
>
> Whenever I sending a mail to you , correct mistakes
> please.
Whenever I send you an email (or send an email to
you), please correct any mistakes.

> How about above the sentenc?
How about the above sentence? (the sentence above?)

How about this letter? (this email?)

> If you busy , next time.
If you are busy, do it next time.
If you are busy now, write me back whenever you can.

Take your time, but I want to know what you think of
this letter. Let me hear from you sooner or later.
Give me a feedback at your convenience. (at your
leisure)
>
> your only sister Seongja
> Your
> P.S.: Don't get overwhelmed. You have made such a
progress. Keep working on it. Most of all, enjoy
learning. Remind Sangmyeong of taking Mg with
B-complex and C. I love you. If I have made any
mistakes, let me know also.
>